Thursday, March 17, 2011

march madness



Mulberry Fields                    Champion                       Branch Library
______________                        Bowl                         ________________
                                     ________________                 Bowl
Weighing In                                                      



I put Mulberry Fields and Bowl in the finals. I enjoyed the inner lining story in Mulberry Fields. What caught my attention was when she kept on saying, "I Say" then proceeded to do a line. That stuck in my head. She was really creative about the rocks and how they guarded the fields. Overall, it made for a good  story. I decided to use bowl as the champion of the poem March Madness. Bowl used great words and was a smooth poem. It explained all you can do with a bowl. What you can become with a bowl. It was more creative then Mulberry Fields in the sense that it used farther imagination. When it comes to poetry, I like a poem that goes outside the lines with imaginative thinking. Bowl did that I enjoyed it more then the three other poems.

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